Thinking of carnivals...
The city comes gushing;
The world spins round and round;
In pink frock and cotton-candy,
The girl lost cannot be found;
Such silence thunderous in the noise,
Not so happy naked breasts,
While the ponies leap pretending to find her,
Behind a purple mask she rests.
When the carousels conspire,
Sealing the fate of the carnival,
Bulbs go off and on,
Lovers hold hands;
Cotton candies and lollipops,
Revolving ponies and scurrying rabbits;
The masquerade held like two frames of a movie,
Stepping back now and stepping ahead now,
Fake smiles, fake eyes, fake joys all,
Revealing the goodness of everything fake,
And the joys derived from magical make-believes,
The carousels conspire,
Tossing the riders up, up, up, in the air!
43 comments:
You got a beautiful mind,i'm a fan
yes indeed you do have a beautiful mind and way with words...xoxo.
carnivals are beautiful, creepy, and romantic!
we don't have carnivals where i'm from but...we have fairs. :) i love riding rides and all the fair/carnvially things to do there.
I would love to go to a carnival, I love the rides and food!
Amazing photos. Lovely poetry, I've always admired people who can write their own. Anything I've ever written is god-awful, honestly. Or really deliberately wanky just for a laugh haha.
Romany
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Such a magical post. Love the poetry and the amazing photos.
It kind of reminds me childhood and the innocence and carefree-ness of it.
Thanks so much for stopping by!
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beautiful images
nice poems ,
cool post
Nice pics:)
Congratulations. I'm not as good as you in expressing what I feel. Wonderful poetry!
oh my, those pictures are so amazing. What a wonderful post!!
*Nathalie
Love the images and love the poem... you are brilliant! xoxo
I love this post!!! xxx
so sweet x
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Hi
Came from Barry's blog.
You have a nice way of expressing yourself. I'm trying to write poetry but it seems to fail sometimes (or so I think) I can't always express all the emotion I feel and I think you do it very well :)
I'll be following your blog..
I'll be on leave for the next two weeks but I'll try to catch up when I get back. :)
so nice!!! there are fa-bu-lous carnivals here in Mexico but all happen in the south and I have never been.... big and colorful and loud like the one in Rio, Brazil... I die to go!!
Carnivals remind me of my childhood :) Mon Mode Blog
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I love your blog darling...Adorable!!! I follow you...and thanks for your lovely comment :D
I love it when the fair comes to town. I love watching the trail of all the vans and trucks.
Hey thanks for the follow and your comment.
Where do you get the time for two blogs xoxo
Tamanna, thanks for visiting me. You asked if I'd read and comment on your poetry. Okay, here it is...wow!
I love this piece. The imagery you've painted, the careful wording. There's a quiet passion in this writing, at least that's what I take away from it.
I hope as you say you'll drop by to visit me often. I think you're a wonderful writer and I'd love to get your feedback on mine.
I'm most definitely following you!
lovely blog and post dear,thank you for the comment.
Love this post today! Both images and words are inspiring. xoxo
great photos. I love carnivals too.
I'm a follower girl, please follow back. thanks :)
awww love those photos, makes me want to go to a funfair right now!!! haha :)
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beautiful...and an inspirational post for me...as i am sitting here thinking of my next poem...maybe i will have to incorporate these images into my work!
Great pics!
I just came across your blog!
It is lovely!
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Oh I love your picture choices, they are just gorgeous.
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Hi Tamanna, just checking back to say hi. I hope things are well with you. :)
i love the photos.. great shots! how i wish we have these kind of carnival here.hehe
im a follower!!
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Hi Tamanna. In response to your last comment, "The One" refers to that ONE person we can't forget no matter how hard we try. The one who (regardless of how good or bad they may have been for us) seems to have taken up a permanent home in our heart, mind and soul and won't allow us to let go of them.
I think most of us have somebody like this in our lives.
What lovely photos... makes me want to find a carousel and ride it.
love the pics! i've never been to a carnival x
Missy
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so adorbs!!
beautiful words! great!
Love these photos, they're stunning!
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Love the carousel picture. It reminds me of home. (There's one by my parent's house).
Great blog! Will check back soon!
ooo i wish a carnival would come to san francisco!
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Love this post! Nice blog!
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beautiful pictures! they have me thinking about summertime!
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These are really inspiring pictures - fab post darling!
Merci beaucoup for your lovely comment - sorry for the late reply!
Stay safe and chic ma chérie,
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That was beautiful! I wish Spring wasn't gone so fast. Here in Florida we're about to get slammed with Summer!
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